Essay 1 about genetic analysis

From Biolecture.org

I think it is good that genetic analysis is now easy. Knowing about our genes is very useful, because our body is all from our genome. It means from our genes we can know what is bad for my body, what is good for my body or what kind of disease we suffer. Also it is really very useful that we can know whether our children can express recessive gene by analysis gene of me and spouse.

This article say "우리 정부도 지난해 12월 의료기관이 아닌 유전자검사기관에서도 의료기관 의뢰 없이 질병예방과 관련한 유전자검사가 가능하도록 `생명윤리 및 안전에 관한 법률`을 개정했다. 체질량지수, 중성 지방농도, 콜레스테롤, 피부노화, 피부탄력, 카페인대사, 혈당, 혈압 등 12개 검사와 관련된 42개 유전자가 대상이다. “, these genes is not really related to above-mentioned genes. I think people wouldn't analysis their genes to know about genes in article. If amend this law to engage a person’s attention, it have to be needed that above-mentioned genes like recessive genes or oncogenes . They have to apeal this analysis is really useful for people's health and then people will raise concern in genetic analysis. After people raise concern in genetic anaylsis, investment will be increased and genetic analysis market will be activated. Analysis for really necessary and important genes is needed not seeking immediate gains and doing temporarily unuseful analysis.